rache ([info]wickedwords) wrote in [info]sga_flashfic,

High Tech by Rachael Sabotini (Slave Challenge)

Challenge: Slave Challenge
Title: High Tech
Author: Rachael Sabotini
Summary: Rodney came to America for high tech.
Gen, McKay, 1135 words

Thank you to the [info]mmmchelle for the beta. No money made, no harm intended. All mistakes are my own.



High Tech


"Fuck." Rodney kicked his foot back against the cubical wall he leaned on, feeling it vibrate. Skysocket was going under, so there was no way he was getting a green card now. He slumped into his ergonomically correct chair and pulled out his H1 documentation, tossing it on the desk. He and his tech visa were on their way back to Toronto.

Or Calgary. Or Regina, Saskatchewan. He felt a little shaky at the thought.

The whole green card process was merely a form of indentured servitude anyway. You promised to work for a company, turning in long hours at below standard wages with few benefits, and in return, they promised to sponsor you for a green card in five or six or eight years.

They might as well have chained him to the desk for all the autonomy he had. He sighed, and started digging though his desk, pulling out the things he wanted to take: ping pong paddle; squoosh ball; picture of that baby bird that kept going around saying 'are you my mother'; Styrofoam model of Skysocket's navigation system, complete with light up LEDs for the venture capitalists...

He slammed the desk door shut and rubbed his wrist over his forehead. He really didn't want to go back to Canada. Canada was great for people and plants and things, but they knew squat about making money.

And Rodney really liked money. He liked what he could buy, what he could have, what he could keep, and his plan was to take it all back with him and rub it in the faces of everyone who ever ignored him, or humiliated him, or made his life hell.

Like his parents.

Now he'd have to go back and find a job. A sense of shame bloomed deep within his stomach, and Rodney covered his abdomen with his hand. He really didn't need this, didn't want it; he couldn't go back to living with his parents again. He hated the snow and winter, and hated their cold distance even more. He would do anything right now to avoid going back. Anything.

"Dr. McKay?" The nametag read 'Simmons', the uniform said 'military', and the dark glasses said 'pretentious'.

"Can't you see I'm packing?"

The man leaned against Rodney's desk and stared down at him, something in his behavior making Rodney's insides twist, and not in a good way. "How do you like America, Dr. McKay?"

Rodney sat back in his chair, looking warily at Simmons. "Seems like a nice enough country if you don't mind inadequate healthcare and a distinct lack of social services."

"Anything you like particularly well?"

Rodney paused a moment, blinking. "Stock options."

"I have a proposal for you." Simmons threw a folder on the desk. "You get your own lab, two assistants, and we sponsor you for a green card." Simmons left his hand on the folder, so Rodney couldn't pick it up. "Skysocket was a very stupid name for a product."

Rodney rolled his eyes. "We shot satellites into the sky and let other companies plug into them. It's a sky socket. What else were we going to call it?"

"I'm sure there are marketing people paid to figure that out."

"Ah, that would be the problem. The idiots here didn't believe in paying out cash if they could trade stock options for it." Rodney had enough of the worthless stuff to completely wallpaper his bathroom, if he ever felt like it.

"If you encountered something called a Stargate, what would you think it did?"

His voice made Rodney think of rocks and ice and sharp, deadly objects, and Rodney could feel goose bumps forming along the backs of his arms, under his long-sleeved shirt. "It's an astronomy portal, isn't it? 'Your gate to the stars.'"

"This is a little more literal than that."

"Excuse me?"

"It's a far more sophisticated version of your sky socket, plugging together planets, rather than satellites." Simmons pulled his hand away from the folder. "No stock options, but we can provide for all of your basic needs."

"Aren't you worried about my security clearance?"

"We've had you under surveillance for quite a while, Dr. McKay. We know everything about you that could lead to a security leak."

"Ah, yes. I forgot to mention that whole fascist interest in other people's lives as something I really hate about America." Rodney immediately opened the file, pulling it into his lap. The first photo alone made him hard with wanting. He'd never seen anything like it, and the second picture was even worse. What kind of technology was that?

While he read and thumbed through the photos, Simmons continued to talk, and Rodney continued to ignore him. When he got to the last page, he knew he was hooked. "Can't I just sell you my soul to get access to this? It would be a lot easier on me."

Simmons took off his sunglasses, and his eyes were dead and cold. "You don't have a soul."

Rodney rubbed his palms against his pants. "What do you want from me?"

Simmons tilted his head up to look at the ceiling. "I need a smart man who doesn't mind not seeing daylight for weeks at a time, who's willing to work head's down on a task until it's completed, and who has no real ties to anyone or anything that might distract him"

"Sounds like you want a slave."

"Essentially, yes. And you need a green card." Simmons put his hand on the folder, but Rodney held on, not willing to let him take it away. "You agree to work for me, and I own you, Dr. McKay. I tell you where to work, what to work on, and how much time you have. You report to me, and if I'm not happy, you aren't happy. Understand?"

"What are my other options?"

"None."

Rodney's heart was pounding. He believed Simmons, he really did. "In that case, I guess my answer is yes."

"Good. Bring your things. You're leaving tonight. We've already cleaned out your apartment."

"So that's it, eh? You show up and whisk me off for parts unknown, and I don't get to tell anyone where I am going or what I am doing?"

"We'll make sure the people who need to know are informed." Simmons tossed Rodney's magic 8 ball into a cardboard box. "No one will ask questions about you, Dr. McKay. We're very good at that."

Rodney didn't doubt it. "Where am I going?"

"Nevada." Simmons put his glasses back on, as if the overhead light hurt his eyes. "Area 51."

"There's no snow, right? Or maybe a little in winter?" Rodney mentally shook himself. It was a desert; he shouldn't be asking about snow. "How hot is it?"

"Hot as hell," Simmons said, and smiled.
Tags: author: rachael_sabotini, challenge: slave

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[info]misspamela

May 28 2005, 21:30:40 UTC 7 years ago

Wow...I...wow. This is fantastic.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 00:32:11 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks!

[info]morwen_peredhil

May 28 2005, 21:35:27 UTC 7 years ago

This is great!

"Can't I just sell you my soul to get access to this? It would be a lot easier on me."

I can so hear him saying this.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 00:41:22 UTC 7 years ago

I was having fun with the whole "the devil and dr. mckay thing.' I'm glad you liked it.

[info]tafkarfanfic

May 28 2005, 21:41:08 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, wow! That's great. I'm so glad you hit the whole H1-B visa thing, because I think it's something a lot of people ignore. I really enjoyed this, because...dude, I've WORKED for that company.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 00:43:31 UTC 7 years ago

Honestly? So have I. ;) I'm glad the H1-B bit worked for you, as I wasn't 100% certain on the details, and just had a general outsider's view of it; cool that it rang true. Thanks!

[info]wesleysgirl

May 28 2005, 21:46:06 UTC 7 years ago

Oh! This is great. :-)

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 00:43:51 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[info]cathexys

May 28 2005, 22:00:03 UTC 7 years ago

oh, how i feel for and with mckay...jumping through 15 kinds of hoops to work in a country i'm not even sure i like...

beautifully done!!! i love the lack of options and the no nonsense approach to rodney's lack of life and why that's an asset here... [and his bad naming ability *g*]

thank you!

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 02:17:58 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, neat! I'm glad you liked it. I was wondering how he ended up with Simmons after I saw 48 hours, and their relationship felt weird to me; Rodney is so desperate to be believed, and so helpless about being able to change or control anything, which leads to all their weird stuff with Sam. So that was all perking in the back of my brain, and I guess it finally found a focus. Thanks!

[info]scrollgirl

May 28 2005, 22:17:58 UTC 7 years ago

Wow, talk about your Canada-U.S. relations... This is it, exactly! Poor Rodney, willing to sell himself for the chance to get at the Stargate. Makes me want to re-watch "48 Hours" right now :)

Great story!

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 02:30:53 UTC 7 years ago

Thank you. ;) I only saw 48 hours with the past couple of months, and was struck by how much he looked like one of the dot com wannabes from the late 90s. I guess those images went in the hopper, and this is what came out.

[info]ship_recs

May 28 2005, 22:20:32 UTC 7 years ago

This is great.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 02:31:46 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks!

[info]porntestpilot

May 28 2005, 22:33:48 UTC 7 years ago

You don't have a soul....bwhaha! Damn right he doesn't! And I love him for it.

And Rodney did get hard looking at the Stargate, you know it.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 03:34:40 UTC 7 years ago

I'm sure that Rodney is occasionally hard during design meetings, or when he has a really good idea. He's just wired that way. ;) Thanks~

[info]the_star_fish

May 28 2005, 22:45:57 UTC 7 years ago

Oh my goodness. That was so very very Rodney. Lovely work.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 03:35:06 UTC 7 years ago

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

[info]mintgold

May 28 2005, 22:52:14 UTC 7 years ago

Loved this. Spot-on Rodney, and I liked to see the, er, "recruitment technique" of the SGC, which sounds just as true as Rodney's history does.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 03:45:22 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks! I can so see Rodney as part of the dot com migration of tech workers out of Canada and into the states; to me, it feels like he should have been here then, with the way money was flying around and the wackiest projects were being funded.

And as far as Simmons goes, well, he has his own techniques. *g*

[info]aclarar

May 28 2005, 22:59:52 UTC 7 years ago

Love it. Love it. love it.


[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 03:45:49 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks!

[info]minnow1212

May 28 2005, 23:02:02 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, man. This was great. The playful bit about the names that echoes back (or forward, I guess) to the gateship stuff, and the fact that Rodney sees fairly clearly what he's getting into.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 04:40:02 UTC 7 years ago

I love the whole game they play with the naming, and that whole gateship thing killed me. I had to find a way to include it. Thanks~

[info]dirty_diana

May 28 2005, 23:55:09 UTC 7 years ago

Oooh. Rodneyfic I believe is so rare. Very, very well done.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 14:06:14 UTC 7 years ago

Glad you liked it. Thanks!

[info]spikedluv

May 29 2005, 00:15:38 UTC 7 years ago

Loved this peek into Rodney pre-Stargate, but this bit, Rodney rolled his eyes. "We shot satellites into the sky and let other companies plug into them. It's a sky socket. What else were we going to call it?", made me LOL. Wonderful parallel. *g*

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 14:06:51 UTC 7 years ago

I was having fun with that bit. *g* Thanks.

[info]terrie01

May 29 2005, 00:30:59 UTC 7 years ago

Perfect Rodney. Absolutely perfect.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 14:07:11 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, cool. Thank you.

[info]z_rayne

May 29 2005, 01:55:27 UTC 7 years ago

Lovely! Such a great insight into Rodney.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 14:19:49 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks, hon!

[info]katyabaturinsky

May 29 2005, 02:26:08 UTC 7 years ago

This is marvelous -- simultaneously grim and funny, with ominous rumblings throughout. A wonderfully believable backstory for Rodney, who is in perfect voice here.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 15:02:03 UTC 7 years ago

I loved making Simmons into the devil, which is where all the horror-feel comes from. It is so cool that people were able to read that. I wasn't sure it would work. Thanks!

[info]ellex42

May 29 2005, 03:21:56 UTC 7 years ago

Oh wow. TPTB really should have filmed a scene just like this.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 15:14:41 UTC 7 years ago

How cool that you think so! Thanks~

[info]farwing

May 29 2005, 04:22:37 UTC 7 years ago

This is awesome and scary and funny.

[info]wickedwords

May 29 2005, 17:29:51 UTC 6 years ago

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks~

[info]maraceles

May 29 2005, 04:41:18 UTC 7 years ago

Oh god, I love this. And I love Rodney's panic/desperation to stay in the States--I feel that very same way every time I have to think about renewing my green card. Because this: "Canada was great for people and plants and things, but they knew squat about making money." is so spot on.

*is bad Canadian*

Man, I'm glad he got in, though. And got to work with the Atlantis people--something has gotta pay him back for working with Simmons. God, that'd suck.

Great story. *g*

[info]wickedwords

May 30 2005, 02:37:08 UTC 6 years ago

LOL! My cublicalmate at my old work was going through the green card process, and when I asked him why, he said something similar. So you are not alone. *g*

And man, yes, Atlantis is his reward for enduring Simmons. It had to have been...hell.

Thanks!

[info]rosewildeirish

May 29 2005, 07:34:17 UTC 7 years ago

Loved it.

[info]wickedwords

May 30 2005, 02:37:36 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks!

[info]_bettina_

May 29 2005, 12:26:10 UTC 7 years ago

This is really good, very cool. Hee.

[info]wickedwords

May 30 2005, 02:38:00 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

[info]tinnny

May 29 2005, 17:11:48 UTC 6 years ago

Wow, the *old* Rodney! *loves*

I wouldn't have pegged him for someone who likes money above all else, but the petty revenge theme totally fits! And he would totally sell his soul for the technology. (Simmons' reply to that stopped me cold! *ugh*)

I also know people who worked on H1 (I was lucky and didn't need more than J1, not intending to stay), and, yes, my company treated them exactly like that as well. Great how torn Rodney is about the US.

[info]wickedwords

May 30 2005, 03:08:18 UTC 6 years ago

Yep, in my mind, revenge was his main reason for wanting the money. *g* I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks!

[info]jack_pride

May 29 2005, 18:36:05 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, Rodney. It's hard to see someone so brilliant so desperate. I see great happiness in your future, Rodney. *g*

[info]wickedwords

May 30 2005, 03:10:18 UTC 6 years ago

He's so incredibly desperate in 48 hours, I'm really glad they shipped him out to Russia after and got him away from Simmons. And Atlantis is so much better than that. *g*

Thanks~

[info]jack_pride

6 years ago

[info]randommagic

May 29 2005, 18:45:20 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, poor Rodney. So desperate not to go back that he's willing to do anything to stay. And I loved his defence of the name skysocket! So very Rodney *g*

[info]wickedwords

May 30 2005, 04:18:37 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks!
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