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Plum 40, by dossier, 38 minutes challenge, amnesty 2008.

Title: Plum 40
Author: [info]dossier
Rating/Length: G, ~840 words
Spoilers: None
Summary: He has no idea how he got here, or why
Disclaimer: All hail the Martins. and maybe Joe and Brad. Possibly Rob.
Notes: Fraught with clichés; don't worry about it and enjoy the weirdness. beta by [F7]
ETA 12/19/09: the podfic version
~*~


The sunlight behind John is so bright that the deep interior of the musty old hangar is dark, and blurry. He steps inside the old half open rolling door, and pulls his aviators off, and automatically snaps them into his battered leather flight jacket. He glances down, and is surprised to find he's wearing gray, pleated trousers that look forty years out of date.

It's cool, and dusty too, and he can barely make out the shapes. He turns back to the hangar door, and the light is too intense, and he can't make out a thing on the other side.

John reorients himself to the hangar's interior, closes his eyes, and counts to fifteen.

He opens his eyes.

There, a Grumman Duck, short and stubby biplane, and there, Piper J-4 Cub in bright yellow, and he has to touch the glossy surface and lean in to peer longingly at the side by side seats. He suddenly hears the clank of a dropped tool and muttered cussing. He follows the sound in the dim light to a P-51 Mustang, her aluminum skin gleaming like a beacon in the dark.

The engine cowls are open, and all John can see is the backside of a man, his head and arms hidden. He watches for a few minutes, until a voice calls out across the hangar. "Can I help you, son?"

The door to the office is open, and the dark shape of a man is limned in the light flooding into the hangar. He has no idea how he got here, or why, so he reluctantly leaves the aircraft for the office.

John closes the door behind him, and the man who called him isn't there. He peruses the room. A wooden desk, with piles of newspapers, an ashtray nearly overflowing with the stub ends of filterless cigarettes squashed into tiny vees; a greasy brown paper sack, next to a half eaten ham sandwich on rye, and French fries. There's a window behind the desk, covered with tightly closed venetian blinds, but the light outside is escaping though the edges and slats, leaving a striped pattern on the desk. The walls are covered in photos, newspaper clippings, and invoices, but the dates are all obscured. A bookshelf under the observation window that looks out over the dim hangar is crammed to overflowing with handbooks, manuals and some old leather bound books; Robinson Crusoe, Peter Pan, Swiss Family Robinson, The Three Musketeers. A layer of dust covers everything but the sandwich and fries.

The hands of an old twenty-four hour clock over the observation window point to 0400, but there's no sound of ticking. The greasy fries on the desk are odorless.

Another door leads to another office, and it's nearly identical, except for the old man behind the desk. His steel gray hair is brushed into a flattop buzz cut that was popular when John was a child. "Knew you'd get here eventually." He motions at the chair in front of the desk. "Have a seat."

There's something about the figure behind the desk that says military to John, even though his clothing is nondescript, and the buttons on the shirt are straining against his girth.

John takes the chair. "Yeah?" He studies the man's familiar eyes, but John can't pinpoint exactly why they feel so.

"Timing was a bit of a surprise, but yes. You ready to get to work?"

He applied for a job? "I guess so. What do you want me to do?" John's hands almost ache with the anticipation of digging into the Merlin 61 engine, getting grease under his nails.

"Pretty much what you've been doing along." The man pulls out a box of Lucky Strikes from his front pocket, and the match head flares. He takes a deep drag, and leans back. The smoke curls and wreathes around itself, and his face. The bright stripes of light from the venetian blinds shine through the smoke.

John frowns. "I'm sorry. Would you mind refreshing my memory? I don't exactly remember."

"Don't worry; It'll all come back to you, when the time is right. But see, there's a twist. I need to add a few details to your job description, but it might put a crimp in your style, if you know what I mean."

He doesn't. John can't remember anything that came before he stepped into the hangar from the bright lights outside. He shakes his head.

"It's alright son, you're among friends." The man with familiar eyes takes another deep drag from his Lucky Strike. "But you've got a choice to make here. I can put you back to work, or you can go on outside. No hard feelings, either way."

John finds himself nodding. "No, sir, if you don't mind, I think I'd like to go to work, instead."

"I was pretty sure that would be your answer." The man glances at the identical clock on the wall, hands stuck at 0400. "We're in no rush. You'll be back at work in no time at all."
Tags: amnesty 2008, author: dossier, challenge: 38 minutes

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[info]auburnnothenna

December 29 2008, 04:50:29 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, hahaha. I was getting sick of that damn diner.

[info]dossier

December 29 2008, 13:13:11 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, me too!

[info]scifi_lemon

December 29 2008, 07:07:33 UTC 3 years ago

everything about this was squee-worthy. I want to know what happened before and after this!!! *puppy dog eyes* please? :D

[info]dossier

December 29 2008, 13:14:42 UTC 3 years ago

hehehehe. Thank you! I'm thinking about the rest. This is after all, a moment out of time..

[info]ratcreature

December 29 2008, 07:33:11 UTC 3 years ago

So he's ascended? And what does the cryptic ancient(?) mean with "I need to add a few details to your job description, but it might put a crimp in your style"?

[info]dossier

December 29 2008, 13:15:58 UTC 3 years ago

I *know* you know, you really, really do.

[info]icarusancalion

December 29 2008, 08:47:30 UTC 3 years ago

Oh, I like John's version better than the diner.

[info]dossier

December 29 2008, 13:16:30 UTC 3 years ago

thank you! *beams*

[info]gaffsie

December 29 2008, 11:35:57 UTC 3 years ago

Oooh, interesting.

[info]dossier

December 29 2008, 13:17:17 UTC 3 years ago

thank you!

[info]korilian

December 30 2008, 13:33:08 UTC 3 years ago

Really cool! That was really good and I'm glad I wasn't the only one thinking ascension.

[info]dossier

December 30 2008, 17:39:19 UTC 3 years ago

no indeed, you are not alone--thank you!

[info]gypsy1969

December 30 2008, 16:54:26 UTC 3 years ago

Yes, that definitely leaves you wanting for more.

[info]dossier

December 30 2008, 17:40:18 UTC 3 years ago

thank you! just a moment out of time.

[info]sgafan33

December 31 2008, 10:29:39 UTC 3 years ago

Plum 40 by dossier

Nice! I'm glad John has something different besides that diner. I'd love to see what happened before and what comes next.

What does Plum 40 mean?

bitty beta: the book is Robinson Cursoe.

[info]dossier

December 31 2008, 12:41:46 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Plum 40 by dossier

thank you! I thought Oma's line, 'it came from your mind', meant that everyone had their own version of the way station. for Harry Potter it was the train platform. *g*

Plum 40 is a flying club that owned a hangar at the Laporte, TX airport. It was essentially a group of really old guys who had been hotshot pilots in WW2 (and one from WW1, with a handful of restored WW2 era craft that they constantly tinkered on, and occasionally took out for exhibitions, mainly the annual Airshow over at Ellington Field. Mostly they sat around and visited a lot. It just seemed like the kind of place that John would have been attracted to as a kid, for a whole lot of reasons.

I've had John living in Houston in a couple of my other stories, and possibly ascended in another, so this is probably a bit of misplaced spackle, possibly a red herring. I haven't decided!

thanks for the tip!

[info]sgafan33

December 31 2008, 18:00:01 UTC 3 years ago

Re: Plum 40 by dossier

Gah, I spelled the book wrong in my first comment. Stupid fingers. It's Robinson Crusoe.

Thanks for clearing up the fic title.

[info]space1traveler

December 19 2009, 12:24:50 UTC 2 years ago

What a great mystery!

Of course, you know I'm going to say, it's just too &)#(* short. But I LOVE it! Will you ever expand it? There's such a story behind this. I an eager to know what it is.

I liked hearing your voice. Will you ever read "East of the Sun, West of the Moon"? I want to read that very badly. You remember how much I love it? If I ever learn how to do a podfic I will write and ask your permission to record it. I've heard it so many times in my head. I know it practically by heart.

Happy holidays to you again and thanks for your stories.

~Karen (Kadie)

[info]dossier

December 19 2009, 15:17:27 UTC 2 years ago

Re: What a great mystery!

heh. In my head this is John's POV of the missing time in Ayse. Time works differently in this story, so Plum40's probably as long as it will get.

I did try, started anyway, to read E/W, but didn't get very far. Maybe that will be the project for this year.

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the podfic and story!

[info]hajimebassaidai

May 22 2010, 06:08:19 UTC 2 years ago

Oh, I do like him ascending to there!

After all, the diner was somewhere Daniel had been as a child. This is much more John.

Where would the rest of the team end up though?

[info]dossier

May 22 2010, 12:02:44 UTC 2 years ago

thank you! Rodney would end up in a library, I think. I'm not sure about Teyla and Ronon--they've never really displayed any inherent tendencies to ascend...

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