rache ([info]wickedwords) wrote in [info]sga_flashfic,

First Night Challenge: Dragon's Hoard by Rachael Sabotini

Challenge: First Night In Atlantis
Category: Gen
Rating: PG
Author: Rachael Sabotini
Summary: Countless piles of precious things


Dragon's Hoard

Grabbing the open case of power bars off his desk, Rodney dumped the whole thing out onto the floor, creating a glittering pile around him. Squatting next to the hoard, Rodney carefully placed each gold-and-brown brick on top of another, first in rows of two, then four, their edges overlapping to make a solid wall, a fortress of food.

Twenty. He had twenty left. Twenty here in the room with him, his personal talismans against hunger and the stupidity that came from having his blood sugar crash. He flushed, thinking of his inability to answer simple questions or think rationally whenever his body betrayed him. He couldn't afford to have that happen again.

He stared at his hoard, deciding if he wanted to eat another bar yet. Oh, he knew there were other cases of power bars, so it shouldn't matter if he took one from his personal stash. He picked the top one off the stack, intending to open it, then set it back on the stack, unopened. Sleep. He needed sleep more than food at the moment. He should get some rest. Tomorrow would be a bad day.

Setting his laptop within easy reach of the bed should inspiration strike, Rodney stripped down to t-shirt and boxers and tumbled into bed. His uniform lay scattered around and across the floor, while the stack of golden power bars flickered in the laptop's faint light.

When he woke an hour later, he glanced at the pile, reassuring himself that it was still there, then slept once again.

Two hours later, he woke with a start, sweat pouring off of him. He rolled onto the floor and sat tailor style in his boxers and t-shirt, sorting and re-stacking the bars.

He didn't put the last on the stack, though. He ate that one, unfolding the wrapper completely and laying it on the top of the pile he'd built, like the flag on a soldier's coffin.

Nineteen now. A very limited supply.

Sweating, Rodney ran a hand over his face, then shoved the pile with it, scattering bars across the floor, under the bed, and into his abandoned uniform clothing. It was all fucked. None of this would work. They had limited food and water, and power was a joke. Rationing was imminent; what they hell would he do when -- for the good of the group -- they wanted to take his power bars away?

He took a deep breath and let it slowly out. They had enough food for the moment, and they could trade for more in the future or grow their own versions of whatever earth varieties could survive here. It would be fine, he told himself. It was okay.

No, it wasn't. Rodney stood up and started pacing the room, his fingers occasionally tapping his teeth as he thought. What if he was allergic to the new foods? What if he went into anaphylactic shock? He was allergic to citrus, but what if some other world's food acted just like lemons to him, even if it looked like wheat or corn. What if there was nothing that he could eat that didn't originate on earth?

What if he had to live the rest of his life on rice, lettuce and soybeans because those were the only earth foods they could raise? And what if he grew to like wheatgrass and tofu shakes?

He stopped and stared at his pile of gold. No matter how many cases there were, it wasn't enough. He started pacing again, his mind dancing from possibility to possibility, each one more horrific than the last. He sat down and grabbed his laptop, awakening it, and immediately sketched out what could be done to combat each issue he foresaw.

Ten minutes later, Rodney pulled the blanket off of the bed and threw it over his shoulders; it was getting cold now. He typed in "check heating and hydroponics system," the feel of the keyboard beneath his hands comfortable and soothing. Each new task list and thought slew one of the horrors he'd created, and the image drifted out of his head.

At last, he closed the laptop with a snap. They'd only need tofu for the first year.

He set down the laptop, picked up the bars and stacked them into a grid, throwing the empty wrapper away.

--end--

Thanks to [info]mmmchelle for looking at this. All mistakes are my own.
Tags: author: rachael_sabotini, challenge: first night

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[info]wickdzoot

March 5 2005, 18:55:30 UTC 7 years ago

Really lovely, highlighting Rodney's founded in reality fears and his ability to work through the tasks to counter the panic.

[info]wickedwords

March 5 2005, 22:14:18 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks! I'm still working on getting the voices and mannerisms down, but I'm really enchanted with how Rodney's minds works and the sorts of lies, truths, and half-truths he tells himself to keep himself going.

[info]thegrrrl2002

March 5 2005, 20:50:16 UTC 7 years ago

This is really lovely--all of Rodney's fears and worries focused down onto a pile of power bars.

He started pacing again, his mind dancing from possibility to possibility, each one more horrific than the last.

I see this perfectly in my mind's eye, his thoughts firing off in all different directions, his mind racing. It's so wonderfully Rodney. Thank you for sharing this, it's wonderful!

[info]wickedwords

March 5 2005, 22:17:04 UTC 7 years ago

all of Rodney's fears and worries focused down onto a pile of power bars.

Oh, I was having fun with that. I love how Rodney holds the external world accountable for things inside of himself, and how he projects and manages his issues by managing the things around him. It's really interesting to try and take apart.

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks.

[info]elvinborn

March 6 2005, 04:07:47 UTC 7 years ago

So very Rodney.
I loved He ate that one, unfolding the wrapper completely and laying it on the top of the pile he'd built, like the flag on a soldier's coffin.
I truly think he would see it that way.

Good stuff :)

[info]wickedwords

March 6 2005, 16:44:17 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks. I was trying to tie in his fears that he might die with the way an empty bottle gets called a 'dead soldier', and use it to invoke how he could see himself as one of the 'dead soliders' of the future. Early Rodney is fun and fascinating, and his mind is a wonderful bundle of stuff.

[info]cesperanza

March 6 2005, 06:35:55 UTC 7 years ago

ADMIN

Hey, for the sake of regularity, could you put "by [Authorname]" into the subject line? It'll save me a TON of time in the archiving! Thanks!!

[info]wickedwords

March 6 2005, 16:44:33 UTC 7 years ago

Re: ADMIN

Done!

[info]cesperanza

March 6 2005, 07:46:52 UTC 7 years ago

Back in a Non-Adminish capacity...

...to tell you that you had me at Grabbing the open case of power bars off his desk, because I could totally see where this was going and had to stop and laugh out loud. Yes, yes, totally--as someone said, this is power bars as symptomatic of all his anxieties about this brave new world. Brilliant idea.

[info]wickedwords

March 6 2005, 16:47:05 UTC 7 years ago

Re: Back in a Non-Adminish capacity...

Cool! I love his food obsession at the moment, and the way that food=security for him. Just too much fun.

[info]flatlanddan

March 6 2005, 14:58:19 UTC 7 years ago

Very nicely done!! I'm a compolsive list maker myself, and it was just nice to read about Rodney dealing with his problems in a way that is *so* his character.

[info]wickedwords

March 6 2005, 17:00:57 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks! I figure Rodney's had these anxiety issues all of his life, and he obviously has developed some coping skills to handle them. Work seems to be one of the ways he structures his thoughts and decreases his tension; he can't think about both dying and "what needs to be done to make sure he doesn't die" at precisely the same time. Distraction like that seems to work for him. *g*

Glad you liked it.

[info]kageygirl

March 10 2005, 05:06:13 UTC 7 years ago

Oh, so very Rodney, reducing the big giant anxieties down to this food in this room>--conversely, so that he will be able to deal with the bigger problems when they come up, like a circle of panic and dealing with said panic.

Very cool. *g*

[info]wickedwords

March 10 2005, 14:43:15 UTC 7 years ago

It's cool to have a character whose anxieties keep showing up in little ways in canon. Obviously, they can't be totally running his life or he wouldn't be on the team, but it's interesting to see them surge and ebb over the course of the series. It's fun and complex, and damage attracts me. *g*
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