ring the bells that still can ring ([info]linaerys) wrote in [info]sga_flashfic,

Fic: Denver Storm (Earthside Challenge)

Author: [info]linaerys
Title: Denver Storm
Rating: Light NC-17
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Word Count: ~1200
Summary: In a car, in a storm, in Denver.
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me, nor to I derive any profit from them.
Spoilers: None
A/N: This started out as a birthday present for [info]girly_curl_3, but then I realized it fit this challenge. Happy Birthday!


“Why did they build the airport so far from Denver?” asks Rodney. John is driving, because John always drives—the one time he let Rodney drive, there were mishaps of the speeding ticket kind, the very sexy state trooper kind, the kind of trouble who gave Rodney the eye and not John. So now John always drives when they are on Earth.

Rodney drums his fingers on the dashboard, on his forearms, on John’s knee, which makes John smile over at him. Rodney smiles back, but it has an edge of impatience in it, because Rodney is always impatient. Well, almost always.

“They didn’t want to hear the planes fly overhead, I guess,” says John.

Rodney cranes his head around in all four directions to look at the storm coming in low over the mountains. The sky is starting to get dark with more than just twilight. John can’t get used to it, the way these storms come over the flat Denver bowl faster than he can drive and they way they suck all the light out of the sky. If they were in their mountain, in SGC, now, John wouldn’t see it, but he’d still feel the storm, in the electricity in the air. A pilot is supposed to feel storms coming.

For a moment it’s dark like the inside of a sock, and John flicks on the high beams, only to see them bounce back at him off the heavy air. Then the sky is full of water, beyond rain, a ripping torrent that makes it impossible to see. A flash of lightning sparkles through the wet windshield and then John hears the tapping of something heavier and harder than rain on the roof. It becomes a wild rhythm-free percussion on the top of the car. John remembers trying to get a convertible from the rental agency, and thanks his far-too-generous luck that they didn’t have one available.

Rodney shouts something, but the water hitting the windshield and the roof of the car is louder than his voice, and John hears only indistinct syllables.

“What?” yells John. He might as well have whispered for all the good it does. He can’t even hear himself.

Rodney leans closer to him so John can feel the heat of him, and yells right in his ear, “Pull over.” Yeah, that’s the right thing to do. John would like to say he could drive through anything, but he can’t see and he can’t hear with the storm bearing down on them.

The hailstones are getting bigger; they were peas when they first hit the windshield, but now they are the size of marbles. John remembers from his meteorology class that hailstones get bigger when an updraft kicks them back up into the cold upper air where the moisture they’ve collected freezes, then they fall and yo-yo back and forth until they get too big to stay aloft. If he cuts one open, he’ll see layers like an onion.

Rodney turns on the dome light to look at their itinerary, but it’s not like the plane to Chile is going to take off without them. Air Force transports can’t take off in a storm like this any more than a commercial jet can, and even if they could, they wouldn’t leave Rodney and John on that first leg of the trip back to Antarctica, back to Atlantis and home.

The storm is so loud it might as well be silent. Rodney looks over at John and opens his mouth to say something a couple times, but John can’t hear him, and he gives up. Rodney taps on his watch, then on the digital clock on the car’s dashboard, as if he can force the minutes to tick along and the storm to finish. Then he shrugs and reaches into the back seat where his papers are. If he gets to those he’ll be lost in reading until the storm is over and probably past then, so John grins and turns off the dome light at the same time as he grabs Rodney’s wrist.

He slides his fingers up Rodney’s wrist, over the palm and interlaces his hand with Rodney’s, which he loves to do ever since he figured out how much of an erogenous zone Rodney’s hands are. Rodney might accuse John of jumping head first into everything, but Rodney goes hands first, always digging into the pieces of Ancient tech, the innards of computers, or a plate of alien food.

And Rodney goes hand-first into sex too—he can never resist tracing John’s lips with his thumb, John’s ears with his index finger. Even now, John holds one of Rodney’s hands captive, but his other hand is snaking through John’s hair, hooking into the back of John’s collar, sliding around to the front and dragging John toward him.

The lightning is right on top of them, a deafening crash-boom with no space between, and John can’t hear the noises Rodney makes when they kiss, but knows Rodney is making them anyway. They don’t have much time before the storm will pass over and leave them exposed here on the side of the highway, so while it still cradles them, John undoes Rodney’s pants and feels Rodney doing the same to him, one-handed; Rodney always likes to show off those talented fingers. John feels like he should be raw—three days of fucking in a Denver hotel room, in bed, on the couch, up against the shower wall—he should be more than sated, but his cock springs up again in Rodney’s big, warm hand.

His cock can’t feel anything beyond warm, and tight, but his body remembers how those fingers felt inside him, his tongue remembers running over the calluses on Rodney’s fingertips. John’s hands don’t have a grip on anything but air and he thinks for a moment that he wants to be doing this to Rodney as Rodney is doing it to him, but then Rodney’s thumb runs up the underside of his cock and John forgets everything besides Rodney’s breath in his mouth, and Rodney’s hand around him. He thrusts into Rodney’s hand like the first time they did this.

There was no talk then, either, just a moment of recognition when the looks that Rodney had been giving him, which had seemed to be in a language more foreign than Ancient, suddenly became clear as English, and it didn’t take talking, just some we-almost-died-lets-fuck rubbing and kissing with their pants partially unbuttoned, Rodney pushing him up hard against the door to John’s room, barely a second after it closed.

John realizes he can’t hear the storm anymore a few seconds after he comes, and he opens his eyes and sees the clouds lifting all around them, the storm packing up and taking its blanket of noise and clouds over the mountains to somewhere else. Rodney gets napkins out of a crumpled MacDonald’s bag on the floor to clean them up.

“We’d better get going,” says Rodney, and he looks amused. “Do you need me to drive? Because I can. I won’t even speed this time.”

That shakes John out of his reverie. “Yeah, I can drive, but what about you.” He glances down significantly at Rodney’s half-undone trousers, tented out at the crotch.

“There’s a bathroom on the airplane, right?” says Rodney. “I’ve always wanted to join the mile high club.”

John starts laughing, because it’s silly—they’ve done this in the Pegasus galaxy, which is so many miles high above Earth that they should both be made the president of the club. “We’re already a mile high,” he says with a grin he knows is goofy. “We’re in the Mile High City.”
Tags: author: linaerys, challenge: earthside

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[info]girly_curl_3

June 20 2006, 20:46:55 UTC 5 years ago

OH NO YOU DID NOT! EEEEeeeeeeeeee!

*skips off to read*

[info]linaerys

June 20 2006, 20:52:01 UTC 5 years ago

Hee! I hope you like it. I haven't been in Denver in quite a while. *g*

[info]linaerys

5 years ago

[info]z_rayne

June 20 2006, 21:35:16 UTC 5 years ago

Mmmm. Very hot.

(Though I can't help thinking things like, "Which highway are they on?" *g* The perils of living where a story is set.)

[info]linaerys

June 20 2006, 21:36:41 UTC 5 years ago

It's been a while, but I remember a loooooong drive from downtown to the airport, even when there's no traffic and no weather.

Thanks!

[info]z_rayne

5 years ago

[info]linaerys

5 years ago

[info]z_rayne

5 years ago

[info]z_rayne

5 years ago

[info]z_rayne

5 years ago

[info]sivan

June 20 2006, 22:02:20 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, that was great. I felt like I was there with them in the car; the storm was so real, the deafening noise of it. Really well done. (Also quite sexy, but I think the visceral experience of the storm made me even happier. Er. Maybe it's because I haven't been in the middle of a nice hailstorm for too long.) Thanks for sharing this. :)

[info]linaerys

June 20 2006, 22:03:14 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks!

I find storms pretty sexy even without the addition of actual sex *g*. I'm glad you liked it!

[info]emeraldsword

June 20 2006, 23:25:45 UTC 5 years ago

I really liked this, peculiarly for some reason the details about how hailstone are formed *g* You got in lots of good detail and tied it all together - good job.

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 11:23:11 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

[info]ferret_kitty

June 20 2006, 23:45:19 UTC 5 years ago

Oh man, storms across Colorado are one of my favorite things *ever*. You captured it so well. Not to mention, marble-sized hail. Ouch.

Cool story.

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 11:24:21 UTC 5 years ago

When I was driving across the US, I got caught in more than one storm like that--never got bigger than pea-sized hail, but still. I love storms.

Thanks for reading!

[info]lishel_fracrium

June 21 2006, 01:03:15 UTC 5 years ago

*squees like mad*

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 11:24:41 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks!

[info]vx10000

June 21 2006, 01:10:23 UTC 5 years ago

There's so much to like in this little space! The serious detail of the storm and hail puts you *there* but also this: John feels like he should be raw... and thinking of those sensations put me into a different *there* altogether. *g*

But it was the reference to Rodney wanting to join the mile high club that made me howl with laughter, immediately recalling the scene in [info]z_rayne's Second Chances. It's such a fabulous interconnected world...

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 03:03:31 UTC 5 years ago

I LOVE that fic, so that's a conscious homage . . .

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting!

[info]adafrog

June 21 2006, 01:16:36 UTC 5 years ago

Great story, but baaad joke at hte end. lolol

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 03:05:01 UTC 5 years ago

Heh. Well, John's a dork and so am I =).

Glad you liked it. This was for a friend above who lives in Denver, so . . . you know.

[info]fairestcat

June 21 2006, 01:23:33 UTC 5 years ago

GUH!

I love the descriptions in this, so very real and visceral you had me listening for the sound of hail outside my own windows.

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 11:25:29 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! I love storms.

Thanks for reading.

[info]thegrrrl2002

June 21 2006, 02:04:41 UTC 5 years ago

Yum! This was fabulous and hot and tasty and all kinds of good things. I especially loved that John starts it all by taking hold of Rodney's hand. Sweet. They don't need words, do they?

Thank you for sharing such a lovely little fic.

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 11:26:25 UTC 5 years ago

They don't need words, but they use them so cutely sometimes =).

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it!

[info]mangst

June 21 2006, 03:24:22 UTC 5 years ago

I've got a thing for sex in thunder storms so this just killed me. Guh!

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 11:26:58 UTC 5 years ago

Me too =).

I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for reading and commenting.

[info]burntcopper

June 21 2006, 13:10:54 UTC 5 years ago

mmmm. oh yes.

(unfortunately, my memories of denver are almost completely spoiled by flying into there from the UK one evening, which is mostly close to sea-level, and getting altitude sickness at breakfast)

[info]linaerys

June 21 2006, 13:13:22 UTC 5 years ago

I remember wondering when the heck I'd gotten so out of shape the first time I tried to do anything athletic in Denver, and then realized we were at elevation.

They do have good storms though! Glad you enjoyed it!

[info]_bettina_

June 21 2006, 13:25:48 UTC 5 years ago

Nice and hot! :-)

[info]linaerys

June 22 2006, 13:37:35 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks!

[info]mcalex22

June 21 2006, 13:45:39 UTC 5 years ago

I love this - it's tender, sweet and kinda hot! Rodney and John making out in a car on Earth, in the cold; and yes, I love Rodney's hands too - large expressive and warm!

Great story :)

[info]linaerys

June 22 2006, 13:39:16 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

(Great icon, BTW.)

[info]bethynyc

June 21 2006, 13:48:50 UTC 5 years ago

Hee! Wonderful! Love car sex!

[info]linaerys

June 22 2006, 13:40:06 UTC 5 years ago

No space for two men near six feet tall, which is why I couldn't have them do any more, but yes, in the car is the all-American place to have sex.

Thanks!

[info]inthekeyofd

June 21 2006, 20:43:03 UTC 5 years ago

Rodney is very tactile...*sigh*

From the Jealous!John that was implied in the beginning to John being silly at the end.

LOVED ALL OF IT!!

[info]linaerys

July 17 2006, 11:26:31 UTC 5 years ago

Eeep. Sorry it took me so long to get back to you!

Thank you for reading this! I'm so glad you liked it.

[info]alizarin_nyc

June 22 2006, 00:05:27 UTC 5 years ago

For a moment it’s dark like the inside of a sock, and John flicks on the high beams, only to see them bounce back at him off the heavy air. Then the sky is full of water, beyond rain, a ripping torrent that makes it impossible to see. A flash of lightning sparkles through the wet windshield and then John hears the tapping of something heavier and harder than rain on the roof. It becomes a wild rhythm-free percussion on the top of the car. John remembers trying to get a convertible from the rental agency, and thanks his far-too-generous luck that they didn’t have one available.

I love this para. Like a sock! It's great, so vivid.

He slides his fingers up Rodney’s wrist, over the palm and interlaces his hand with Rodney’s, which he loves to do ever since he figured out how much of an erogenous zone Rodney’s hands are.

GUH AND GUH.

And Rodney goes hand-first into sex too—he can never resist tracing John’s lips with his thumb, John’s ears with his index finger. Even now, John holds one of Rodney’s hands captive, but his other hand is snaking through John’s hair, hooking into the back of John’s collar, sliding around to the front and dragging John toward him.

This is the sexiest moment of all - including the sex. I love this, the two of them, in the car with rain and hail -- gorgeous and evocative.

Rodney's hands! Yes.

[info]linaerys

July 17 2006, 11:24:13 UTC 5 years ago

I've been lax responding to comments over here.

Thank you very much for the detailed feedback! I'm really glad you liked it.

[info]xxsignsoflifexx

June 22 2006, 00:17:53 UTC 5 years ago

So Very Hot ::fans self:: Just wonderful.

Val

[info]linaerys

June 22 2006, 13:40:24 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

[info]lamardeuse

June 22 2006, 00:42:04 UTC 5 years ago

Oh, nice. :)

[info]linaerys

July 17 2006, 11:24:42 UTC 5 years ago

Sorry it took me so long to respond . . .

Thank you for reading!

[info]30toseoul

June 22 2006, 01:30:35 UTC 5 years ago

Dude. Hot thunderstorm roadside handjob, mention of three days of fucking in a hotel room, and Rodney's hands. This fic slams right into several of my best kinks.

I really loved that final paragraph, too. The mile-high bit was just gorgeously structured and a perfect, giddy wrap-up to a smoking PWP. Thank you so much for sharing!

[info]linaerys

June 22 2006, 13:43:42 UTC 5 years ago

Yay!

The mile-high bit was just gorgeously structured and a perfect, giddy wrap-up to a smoking PWP.

I'm glad that worked! It seemed terribly silly but also right for John, so I left it in.

Thanks for reading and commenting! Yeah, it's a lot of my kinks too--I didn't specifically try to put as many as possible in a ~1000-word fic, but that is how it worked out =P.

[info]elven_wolf

June 22 2006, 03:00:04 UTC 5 years ago

Very nice! I like the sensory details of it. The sounds and the tactile and how it all blends together.

[info]linaerys

July 17 2006, 11:25:01 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you! Sorry it took me so long to respond!

[info]elven_wolf

5 years ago

[info]porntestpilot

June 22 2006, 03:43:06 UTC 5 years ago

Oh.My.God. Bawhahahaha. The lameness of John rules.

[info]linaerys

June 22 2006, 13:41:56 UTC 5 years ago

I've never even seen Supernatural but your icon ROCKS.

Hee. John is lame, even when he's sexy. I'm glad you liked it!

[info]kudra2324

June 22 2006, 06:18:20 UTC 5 years ago

oooooh, lovely. i have a particular fondness for being in a car in the pouring rain, and i love the way you describe it here - as john and rodney in their safe little car haven, cradled by the storm.

[info]linaerys

July 17 2006, 11:25:51 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks! I love being in a car in a storm too.

[info]looking4tarzan

June 22 2006, 12:07:04 UTC 5 years ago

lol they so need to be on that step in Denver (think its to the city hall) with the mile high marker on it


lol brilliant hot stuff

[info]linaerys

July 17 2006, 11:27:01 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you!

Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner.

[info]lillyjk

June 22 2006, 22:09:37 UTC 5 years ago

*sigh*

I love thi. every single word.

[info]linaerys

June 25 2006, 03:26:24 UTC 5 years ago

Thank you very much!
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