Kylie Lee ([info]kylielee1000) wrote in [info]sga_flashfic,
2005-09-11 10:37:00
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"Temporary Engagement" by Kylie Lee [Harlequin]

Title: Temporary Engagement
Author: Kylie Lee ([info]kylielee1000)
Pairing: Weir/Zelenka, with a touch of McKay/Sheppard ER
Length: ~12,700 words
Rating: PG
Archive: Ask first.
Summary: The mousy secretary has to pretend to be engaged to the busy executive boss. You know, because that always happens.
Challenge: Harlequin
Beta: [info]thegrrrl2002 and [info]wpadmirer read it over and said to post; and [info]kageygirl helped out with a crucially important canon question but is otherwise blameless.
Warning: AU. Oh, my, AU.
Note: Czech swear words from Insultmonger. Title from Jessica Hart's Temporary Engagement (Harlequin, 1999). View the fabulous cover art by [info]liviapenn.

Click on the link above to read the fic at my Web site. Alas, it is too long to fit into a single LJ post.
Tags: author: kylielee1000, challenge: harlequin

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[info]claire

September 11 2005, 15:02:16 UTC 6 years ago

I'm so glad someone did the secretary in love with their boss.

And this was delightful!

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:44:15 UTC 6 years ago

Secretary in love with boss = classic! Of course, I love it when the man has to be the mousy secretary.

Glad you liked!

[info]sweetvalleyslut

September 11 2005, 15:42:03 UTC 6 years ago

I am SQUEAKY with love for this story. Eeep. Such an awesome way to do Weir/Zelenka.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:45:02 UTC 6 years ago

Why thank you! I always like Squeaks Of Love. I myself haven't gotten over the fact that this is kinda...het. What's that about??

I think this is the perfect pairing for this kind of silly story.

[info]sarren

September 11 2005, 15:46:33 UTC 6 years ago

Well obviously you should be writing trashy romance novels for a living.

*considers at above statement*

Um, that was a compliment?

It was great. And Zelenka was so cute :)

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:46:05 UTC 6 years ago

Well obviously you should be writing trashy romance novels for a living.

I'll keep this in mind! I wrote this to be pretty straight up, but I was giggling as I was typing, esp. the long descriptions of what people were wearing, because all the conventions are just so...silly.

Glad you liked! And Zelenka is nothing BUT cute.

[info]elayna88

September 11 2005, 15:47:04 UTC 6 years ago

Not my normal pairing, but that was just incredibly sweet and fun. Such quiet yearning. I want to hug Zelenka.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:46:53 UTC 6 years ago

Not my normal pairing

Me neither. Het? What's that about? I've only written one other het story (and it was in a slash series).

Glad you liked!

[info]wickedwords

September 11 2005, 16:04:49 UTC 6 years ago

Oh. Oh. I have to grin now; this story made me very happy. I loved all the work you did translating the SGA universe into this one, so that it retained the essence of the original show. And oh, Radek and Elizabeth! ::sigh:: He was adorable, and she was strong, and I squeak with enjoyment.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:49:06 UTC 6 years ago

this story made me very happy

Oh, I'm so glad, because...well...crack!fic, you know. It's yummy.

It was interesting to write the big scene at the end, where Elizabeth professes her love, and that everything Zelenka did, she interpreted, because in the romance novels, the man always says that, but I wanted to retain her character and the fact that she's a woman. So instead of being big and strong and sweeping Zelenka away, she had to be big and strong while being ready to sob in despair, in a girlie way, because...she's a girl.

You know?

Anyway, glad you grinned and squeaked.

[info]daneffew

September 11 2005, 16:05:02 UTC 6 years ago

This is great. I would normally never read anything like this
but Dr Z is such a woobie.

And I agree this could have been a real novel. And it probably would be sellable.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:50:24 UTC 6 years ago

I would normally never read anything like this

And I would normally never write anything like this! *g*

this could have been a real novel

Of course, it's already been written about ten thousand times. This is just its latest riff! And I think the thing that makes it fun is the thing that makes it unsellable: the male protagonist and POV.

Glad you enjoyed!

[info]umbo

September 11 2005, 16:08:54 UTC 6 years ago

Loved it.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:50:39 UTC 6 years ago

Loved it.

::squeezes you::

[info]merryish

September 11 2005, 16:18:41 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, this is lovely and fun and all of them are perfect. So much detail and care went into converting the universe, I'm way, way impressed. And it hits my secret Weir/Zelenka button, which I didn't even know I had! =)

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:52:35 UTC 6 years ago

So much detail and care went into converting the universe, I'm way, way impressed.

I'm so glad you liked the conversion!

The fic ended up being really a lot longer than I had anticipated, and I write very slowly, so the extension of the challenge deadline meant I could actually finish it. It was gonna kill me, slaving two weeks over the story only to miss the deadline by minutes, but then ces saved my bacon by extending it.

I think this story is oddly straight up. But perhaps that is its charm, if that is the word I want.

[info]drlense

September 11 2005, 16:31:25 UTC 6 years ago

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!

The story is great, the characters are great, and the clothes porn was FABULOUS. Tremendous thank you!!!!

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:53:58 UTC 6 years ago

and the clothes porn was FABULOUS

I am so glad you noticed! Because that is one of the things that I always find incredibly hilarious about romance novels: the fixation on everybody's clothing. I also got in a description of an Oriental rug, as Ronon's head was being slammed into it.

It was very nice being able to write about men's clothing instead of women's, although I had to do some quick online research to get the fabrics right. It's all in the details, you know?

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[info]mahoy

September 11 2005, 16:33:23 UTC 6 years ago

That was so sweet.
And I know that this is an odd point to fixate on, considering Rodney and John were secondary characters, but I really loved how secure they were in their relationship ... the "cute couple" comment just made me smile madly for some reason.
::loves::

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:55:39 UTC 6 years ago

I really loved how secure they were in their relationship

I was toying with the idea of doing something with their relationship, like having Weir have some big realization because of it, but decided against it; but I left their relationship in the background because I liked the idea of Rodney crushing on Radek. Oh! The irony of having a "married couple" at the dance and them being unable to dance together.

[info]mmmchelle

September 11 2005, 16:35:08 UTC 6 years ago

I've been waiting for this fic ever since Grrrl mentioned you were working on it. It was worth the wait. Fun and sweet and I adored them all, Elizabeth and Radek, John and Rodney, and Carson sans dirk. /g/ Wonderful story.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:56:46 UTC 6 years ago

I really loved how secure they were in their relationship

I'm sure you had to wait a long time...if it hadn't been for the extension, I think I would have missed the deadline, because this took me forever to write.

I'm still dreaming of Carson in formal kilt wear. ::dreams::

Glad you liked!

[info]wickdzoot

September 11 2005, 16:40:48 UTC 6 years ago

As always, lovely, great fun, and what can I say, I adore Elizabeth/Radek.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:57:39 UTC 6 years ago

I adore Elizabeth/Radek

Oh, I do too! In the show itself, it's so delightfully understated, yet clear that he adores her, and she seems clueless about it. Who can resist such a challenge?

Glad you had fun!

[info]burningchaos

September 11 2005, 16:43:16 UTC 6 years ago

I love this Weir/Zelanka is my favorite het couple in SGA.

[info]burningchaos

September 11 2005, 16:44:14 UTC 6 years ago

Gah Zelenka I can't spell today...

[info]flambeau

September 11 2005, 16:50:59 UTC 6 years ago

*huge grin* Oh, the romance! Loved it. :)

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:58:31 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, the romance!

Shockingly sweet, isn't it? Hee! It was so much fun to play in the romance sandbox.

[info]thecomfychair

September 11 2005, 17:05:45 UTC 6 years ago

I was hoping someone would to Weir/Zelenka for this challenge! and it was the secretary in love with the boss plot, a true classic. *g* Excellent job.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 12:59:35 UTC 6 years ago

I was hoping someone would to Weir/Zelenka for this challenge! and it was the secretary in love with the boss plot, a true classic.

Yes, it is a classic, and just a little twist was needed to make the woman the boss and the man the secretary!

This foray into het has me worried, though. What has come over me?? ::checks pulse::

[info]cathexys

September 11 2005, 17:07:14 UTC 6 years ago

that was perfect!!! romance and intrigue andespionage...and such a perfect romance plot while still maintaining all the important touchstones ofa good AU. i loved how you placed all the characters and the john/rodney relationship and the rodney/zelenka working interaction and i was so glad you didn't take radek's abilities away but used his foreign nationality to force him in the secretary position. perfect romance ploy but also alltoo realistic...just...wonderful!!!

this is one of the most perfect responses to this assignment...i totally adore it and you (as if you didn't know that :-)

thank you!!!

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:01:22 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, hey, I didn't think of this until you said it! I very much wanted to retain the integrity of Zelenka's scientific, smart background, and you're right: the nonnational thing was a ploy to keep him a secretary (that, and his love for Elizabeth, of course).

i totally adore it and you (as if you didn't know that

Back at ya! So glad you enjoyed.

[info]thegrrrl2002

September 11 2005, 17:20:22 UTC 6 years ago

Did I mention how much I love the dancing? Because I loved the dancing. So romantic. Holding each other close, and Weir in that lovely dress, Zelenka all dashing and handsome...::sighs::

Great title, BTW!

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:02:25 UTC 6 years ago

Yes, dancing! Romantic dancing! Zelenka discreetly feeling her up (her back, anyway); Weir closing her eyes and melting into him; *happy sigh*

I couldn't think of a title, so I just googled Harlequin title listings and selected one that seemed appropriate. I'm just surprised there was only one, and from 1999. This plot is a classic! A classic, I tell you!

[info]in_vulnerable

September 11 2005, 17:34:54 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, I want to marry this story! Right after I've eaten Radek with a spoon. Radek in tux... *drifts off* All the cameo appearances were a hoot and I loved how you transposed the whole Atlantis world. Wonderful wonderful story. So sweet and lovely and so Radek. Thanks for a great read!

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:03:15 UTC 6 years ago

Radek in tux... *drifts off*

Yes, he cleans up very nicely indeed, doesn't he?

Glad you liked the transposition! Thanks for your sweet FB.

[info]alyse

September 11 2005, 17:48:56 UTC 6 years ago

That was lovely.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:04:14 UTC 6 years ago

That was lovely.

I can't get over the fact that I wrote het. Of course, there's no explicit sex (that would be completely wrong for the story), so I suppose I shouldn't be concerned. Yet.

Love your icon, btw! Radek always needs a shave. I love that about him.

[info]daughtershade

September 11 2005, 18:17:48 UTC 6 years ago

Okay, that was like the sweetest thing ever and I've gone all melty. Aw! I do so adore Radek... and Elizabeth at the end at a loss for words trying to confess her love. That was just great. Excellent job!

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:05:55 UTC 6 years ago

and Elizabeth at the end at a loss for words trying to confess her love

Yes, our Radek has reduced the powerful CEO to tears! HA!

That scene was hard to write, because I was riffing off romance novels where the hero, at the end, lists all the things that the heroine did that, to her, seemed like everyday, stupid things, but to him, revealed her wonderfulness. I had to switch it all around while maintaining Weir's CEO-ness and her femininity. Add to that the fact that she tends to be direct...gah!

Glad you got all melty!

[info]_bettina_

September 11 2005, 18:18:45 UTC 6 years ago

Oh yeah, much love for this story! Hee! :-D

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:06:35 UTC 6 years ago

Ha! Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed! I myself think it's oddly straight up, but as I say elsewhere in these comments...perhaps that is the charm of the fic.

[info]saba1789

September 11 2005, 18:38:24 UTC 6 years ago

This story was so cute and fabulous - I loved it! Thanks for writing and sharing it :-) .

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:07:05 UTC 6 years ago

This challenge is total crack. This was so much fun to write!

Glad you enjoyed.

[info]kelliem

September 11 2005, 18:47:05 UTC 6 years ago

Wow. What a lovely job you did with this. It's nice to see these romance novel tropes done well, as they sometimes are even in 'real life.' I'm very impressed. I bet you could file the serial numbers off this and publish it professionally.

And I have to tell you I giggled when I saw the name of Dr. Nisbet's company. Hee!

[info]bibliokat

September 11 2005, 19:09:27 UTC 6 years ago

Wow. Your icon= guh!

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[info]teza

September 11 2005, 18:56:30 UTC 6 years ago

Eeee-eee-eee. </dorkish squealing girly noises>

I love it. Zelenka. Zelenka! Zelenka/Weir! Zelenka/Weiiiiir (with a side of mckay/shep)! ZELENKA!

Eeeeeee.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:09:49 UTC 6 years ago

I love it. Zelenka. Zelenka! Zelenka/Weir! Zelenka/Weiiiiir (with a side of mckay/shep)! ZELENKA!

Woohoo! I see we are in complete agreement. And thanks for your squealy noises! They totally made my day.

[info]rike_tikki_tavi

September 11 2005, 19:05:40 UTC 6 years ago

Very nice. Made me feel all warm and toasty.

[info]kylielee1000

September 12 2005, 13:10:22 UTC 6 years ago

Made me feel all warm and toasty

Aw, you're sweet. That's the Weir/Zelenka love for you: it's like toast! Warm, toasty toast!
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